Saturday, 11 February 2012

Application Letter Writing. Draft 1


Here is Draft 1! I thought the lesson on Friday was really helpful in drafting out this letter.
The company I am writing to is Cellworks Research and here is the link to their website. By the way, I could not find the Contact Name, so I addressed to the Chairman and Managing Director of the Cellworks Research directly. 

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Qu Kui
Blk 146 Gangsa Road
#11-293
Singapore 670146

10 February 2012

Anand Anandkumar
Chairman and Managing Director
Cellworks Research India Limited
R&D Center
3rd floor, West Wing, "Neil - Rao Tower"118,
Road # 3, EPIP, Whitefield,
Bangalore - 560 066

Dear Dr. Anandkumar
Cellworks Research Internship

I am writing to apply for the internship under the NUS Overseas College Short Programme. I am eager to embark on the projects offered by CellWorks Research, especially the therapies for oncology. Currently a Year 3 Bioengineering student in the National University of Singapore (NUS), I hope to apply my knowledge to contribute to the medical science industry.

With the biochemistry knowledge from life science modules; experience from design modules and analytical skills developed from my engineering curriculum, I believe that I will play a useful role in the Cellworks team. In addition, my short experience in the Tissue Modulation Laboratory (TML) improved my technical dexterity in research work.

During my National Service in the Singapore Armed Forces, I was awarded the Best Specialist of the Month twice in recognition of my diligence and competence. I was then nominated to attend the Platoon Sergeant Course for my meticulous planning and responsible attitude.

To experience something different, I joined the Great Eastern Internship Program (Insurance). Competing against other groups, my team was disciplined and worked closely together, eventually receiving the Best Group Award. I also enjoy team sports at my leisure time. With a group of friends, we participated in the beach soccer tournament organized by the faculty and we emerged as second runner-up.

As a project manager in InnoClub, I proposed to collaborate with the professors of the design module to enhance the quality of the module via a sharing session with the juniors. I formulated and conducted a lesson to a class of 50 juniors and received positive feedback from the audience and professors. At short notice, I took up the role of camp director to plan and directed the first Bioengineering Freshmen Camp. Eventually, my team and I managed to overcome the constraints of limited resources and conducted the camp successfully with 70% of the freshmen attending.

I volunteered to serve as the class representative to convey my course mates’ intentions, provide suggestions to the professors and I managed to resolve the time-table clashes issues of my course mates. For my active involvement in student activities, I am appointed the FOE Class Ambassador to connect undergraduates and the alumni.

In review of Cellworks Research’s mission and vision, I believe my relevant skillsets will make me a competent individual and a supportive team player for the research internship. Moreover, a proactive communicator enhances team projects and is more adaptable to problems or even cultural differences.

I have enclosed my resume and should you have any other enquiries, please do not hesitate to contact me at the number provided in the resume. Thank you and I look forward to your positive reply.

Sincerely yours

Qu Kui

Enclosure
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By the way, can anyone teach me how to upload the pdf file of the resume? I tried Insert Image but it does not seem to work. Thanks :)

1 comment:

  1. Hey QK! Grace Yee here!

    For this portion:

    Anand Anandkumar
    Chairman and Managing Director
    Cellworks Research India Limited
    R&D Center
    3rd floor, West Wing, "Neil - Rao Tower"118,
    Road # 3, EPIP, Whitefield,
    Bangalore - 560 066

    Maybe you would like to include "Dr" in front of Anand Anandkumar. Alos, I think you can do away with the commas for the address (mainly for those after "118" and "Whitefield".

    Actually I'm not sure if there should be a dash after "Bangladore" in the Postal Code. Maybe you want to check with Prof? :)

    Also, I feel that your letter is mostly explaining your achievements. It's a good thing! I really like how you can explain them so well. :) I call this indirect marketing actually. :P

    I feel that it would be good if your skills and qualities are more explicitly mentioned; they will help market yourself better. :) I call this direct marketing. :P

    Maybe you can rephrase your achievements in such a way to make your skills and qualities stand out more. Also, elaborate on how these skills and qualities will benefit the company/organisation you are writing to. Employers are keen to know how you can contribute to them! :)

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